like always tell the truth, and you reap just what you sow.
But they never seem to care too much about my current woe.
Instead they try their very best not to undergo,
the same position they see me in that effects me so.
For, to them, I serve the purpose of a cautionary foe.
Once I was told, in matter of fact, bet high and sell low.
Then when my money disappeared they said go with the flow.
Both phrases hold the same weight as don't eat yellow snow.
Whether the sun will rise tomorrow or the rooster crow,
are happenings that are nothing more than nature's status quo.
So with every small piece of advice does my patience thinner grow.
Wednesday, June 17, 2009
POETRY: "Advice Given, Patience Taken"
Posted by
A Writer Under The Influence
12:07 a.m.
"Advice Given, Patience Taken"
written by jeff campagna
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